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Subrick  
 




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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:36 am    Post subject: A little song I wrote. Reply with quote

Tell me what you think.

Excuse All The Blood

Excuse all the blood!
Sorry for shooting indoors! (x2)

Suicidal!
Depression!
Rape the villiage!
Pilliage them all!

Within the woods
Lies a wood house
Melancholy
Psychomantis!

Slicing!
Cutting!
Skull made necklace
From his remains!

Mayhem!
Carnage!
Excuse all the blood!
Sorry for shooting indoors!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm sorry... I wouldn't consider that a song. Even metal singers try to incorporate some sort of poetry in their songs.

It seems like you just threw a bunch of violent words together, honestly. (Hey, you wanted to know what I think...)

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bjwdestroyer wrote:
So who are you planning to have sing this little gem of yours? Barry Manilow?


I can't stop laughing.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So who are you planning to have sing this little gem of yours? Barry Manilow?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

CleverTangent wrote:
It seems like you just threw a bunch of violent words together, honestly. (Hey, you wanted to know what I think...)


Perhaps he's trying to write a grindcore song?
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

@ bjwdestroyer

One of my 2 bands. That's the problem. My first band, which I write more stuff like this, is an experimental death metal/nu metal/prog. metal band. My second band, which I write stuff that's more personal, is a metalcore band. I read it to them over the phone and they both liked it.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Subrick wrote:
@ bjwdestroyer

One of my 2 bands. That's the problem. My first band, which I write more stuff like this, is an experimental death metal/nu metal/prog. metal band. My second band, which I write stuff that's more personal, is a metalcore band. I read it to them over the phone and they both liked it.


Maybe they said they liked it so you wouldn't kill them?

* is scared of OP *
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote


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