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**expertwin** · Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 2244 Location: Meh.

I want to show you my songs that I created.

"eAR rAP" (that's not a typo)

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?vzet5wiozvbeh8h

"Life. Or Not"

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?r90u08413offt5t

Tell me what you think.
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voidedalive2x wrote:

of COURSE it's doable, you ninny! Don't you cop out on me now!

**bclare** · Joined: 21 Jun 2008 Posts: 6048 Location: Boston

I don't want to have to download a file and then listen to it. I will gladly listen to your music if it can be streamed somewhere online (bandcamp, soundcloud, whatever)
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**MasterNobody** · Joined: 11 Jul 2008 Posts: 2791 Location: Duxbury, MA

I personally found these tracks to be absolute polar opposites.

I found eAR rAP to be more like ear rape... sorry but it just had to be said. I found it to be unlistenable, and at one point it actually got so loud that it did hurt my ears. I would recommend being more conservative with your volume changes.

Life. Or Not, however, I found interesting from a musical standpoint. Obviously it isn't very polished, but that's to be expected because I'm sure you're using either freeware or really cheap stuff. I thought it was artistically interesting, and I particularly liked the use of accenting in the first drum break about 30 seconds in.
Got ear raped again at the end though. >_> Other than that, I thought LON was well done. I would go in more of that minimalist direction with your future work, rather than trying to stretch only a few musical ideas into 5 minutes like the first song.

You've got potential for sure

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**GregoryZero** · Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 2338 Location: California

To be quite honest, it sounds like you basically sat there and messed around in FL Studio for about 20 minutes. Nothing really makes either of these songs stand out except for the length of eAR rAP, which isn't really a good thing.
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**Parama** · Joined: 19 Mar 2008 Posts: 5870

ear rape: wtf is up with the mixing, it's awful and you should feel bad. the volumes change around randomly. oh hi 1:22 congratulation I'm stopping here.

life: if you aren't mixing a minor scale with a major scale here then my musical ear has failed me, this is just dissonant as hell. sounds really empty at times. kinda boring.

note I hate electronic music
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**HellAshes** · Joined: 06 Apr 2006 Posts: 8320 Location: Livingston, NY

In Life or Not it's an augmented chord progression. It's a bit dissonant since generally augmented chords are followed by some sort of resolution, like a major chord.
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**bclare** · Joined: 21 Jun 2008 Posts: 6048 Location: Boston

**expertwin** · Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 2244 Location: Meh.

http://soundcloud.com/coolguy97/meetloaf

MEETLOAF

http://soundcloud.com/coolguy97/screwed

Screwed

Both of these songs have customs made. The ending in MEETLOAF is charted differently than what it is. (I know.

)

Screwed was made in Guitar Pro 6.
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voidedalive2x wrote:

of COURSE it's doable, you ninny! Don't you cop out on me now!

**thewinnerisgeeg** · Joined: 25 Jun 2009 Posts: 1886

Screwed isn't terrible, but MEETLOAF just made me go
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**Parama** · Joined: 19 Mar 2008 Posts: 5870

MEETLOAF - As close to pure noise as you can get without actually being noise. Fast nonsense =/= music.

Screwed - Still doesn't sound like it's actually in onee scale but this is actually music to an extent sooo gj d(''d)
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**expertwin** · Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 2244 Location: Meh.

**GregoryZero** · Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 2338 Location: California

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**expertwin** · Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 2244 Location: Meh.

New song. It's called "When".

http://soundcloud.com/coolguy97/when

Sounds awesome. Has an awesome drum solo too.

Also, deleted all my other tracks except "Screwed".
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voidedalive2x wrote:

of COURSE it's doable, you ninny! Don't you cop out on me now!