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mdizzy 
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GuitarBoy55
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:45 pm Post subject: |
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Its finished, but still I must wait for some things to go through before I make it official, until then enjoy the lyrics from the entire album:
| Quote: | Title: Death Penalty
Artist: Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Chorus:Banished/from this paradise/enter death through
sin//Banished/from the garden/the wages sin pays is death//
Verse 1: Formed by dust/born from the womb of earth/but from the
center turn away//The serpent cometh/to deceive us all/reach out
towards your downfall//
Verse 2: Cursed is the ground/the barren path you crawl/leaving
to abandon it all//the entrance is guarded/by creatures and a
sword of fire/you've made your bed and now its time to retire//
Verse 3: Now is the time/to pay for our crimes/we cannot run and
cannot hide//the choice is yours today/fight for survival/the
dawn recoils upon your arrival//
Title:Wanderer
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Verse 1: My aching body yearns for something more/corrosive
feeling that I've felt before//And I am driven to escape this
pull/before it devours my very soul//
Prechorus 1: Is it, possible to find the one/I just want die with
someone//The pleading, echoes from my heart/be wary of its
treachery...Ahhh!//
Chorus: I am a wandering soul/looking for the piece to make me
whole//
Verse 2: Take my heart and cast it into the well/take my love and
send it straight to hell//Why do I have to go on feeling this
way/when all its done for me is cause me agony//
Prechorus 2: Is it, possible to find the one/I just want die with
someone//I ask if her love could not be true/I see her forked
tongue whispers lies to you//
Chorus 2: I am a wandering soul/looking for the piece to make me
whole// I need a receptacle/to put my love into//
Title:Anything
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Chorus: When I see you walkin out that door/I wish that I could
see you more/and when I see you coming in/for you I would do
anything
Verse 1: I hate to feel this way/when I see your smile
everythings okay/I don't know what to do/so I try to talk to
you//you are the girl that I want/such a shame when I feel that I
don't have a shot/I am single and free/but all I want is for you
to chain me down/
Verse 2: When you look at me with those eyes/I feel my world
capsize into the blue/when your not here I think of you/and hope
you think about me t /hopeless romantic fool/I think the game
of love is cruel/I try to stay away from it/but it pulls me back
into its burning pit/
Outro: Center my soul/I feel alone/I cannot allow you in/I don't
want you to cause me pain//
Title:Recollection Of A Past Life
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Verse 1: Remember the time you went through the windshield/we
were just screwing around/having fun every saturday/Oh man those
were the days
Verse 2: We threw that kid into the dumpster and pushed it down
the stairs/we were just a bunch of crazy kids/oh man those were
the days
Chorus: What happened to us/will you still be there/when I
fall/down//I am always here/looking over my shoulder/waiting for
the day when you need me/
Outro: Just waiting for the
day//things/change/When/will/I/be/saved?
Title:Regressive Oppression
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Verse 1: Prepare for the next attack/violence is the only thing
they understand/fight fire with fire/fight hate with more
hate//Anger always ensues/when you challenge a selfish mans
pride/political agenda/lines his pockets from the hands of the
dying//An enemy is a man/that you don't understand/and is someone
who/you can take what they have//who needs a concience/when you
have your decadence/send them all to the killing fields/so you
can suffer no consequences for your outsourced actions//
Chorus 1: Hate agenda/rolling dice with mens lives(roll the
dice)//
Verse 2: Steel-plated opressors/send the forces out/its the same
everywhere/just from different points of view//universally
speaking/everyones is everyones enemy/but if we all watch our
backs/who sees whats ahead//trust is a liability/don't trust
anybody/lets kill what makes human/in favor of the animal//who
needs progress/were fine repeating the same mistakes/over and
over we go/killing each other until we both die
Chorus 2&3: Hate agenda/rolling dice with mens lives(roll the
dice)//And if they all die in a war/At least you'll be fine//
Bridge: Regression//Oppression//
Outro: Prepare for the next attack/violence is the only thing
they understand/fight fire with fire/
Title:Regressive Oppression
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Verse 1: You reap what you sow/you pay what you owe//The
tendencies of man/lie in your heart(you're never finished/as long
as you never start)
Chorus: You've bled me of all I've got to give/you suck me dry
and then make you're exit/I see her leave it all behind/is there
nothing I can do but watch her slowly die//you chain yourself to
superficial existence/you aimlessly stagger with defiant
persistence/I see her leave it all behind/I turn away as she
slowly dies//
Verse 2: You can't stay if you go/you leave too fast and return
too slow//The trepidations of a woman/pierces through my
heart(Either never come back/or never depart)
Chorus: You've bled me of all I've got to give/you suck me dry
and then make you're exit/I see her leave it all behind/is there
nothing I can do but watch her slowly die//you chain yourself to
superficial existence/you aimlessly stagger with defiant
persistence/I see her leave it all behind/I turn away as she
slowly dies//
Chorus 2: Turn Away//Don't look at me(don't look at me)//Tear
Away//Why, why
Title:Mutiny
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Chorus: I've never been betrayed like this before/I can't trust
anyone anymore//and I've never hurt like this before/Close me off
I shut and lock the door//
Verse 1: Nothing lasts forever/but I still never saw this
coming//I've know you my whole life/stab at me until I bleed you
don't need me anymore//you fire away/desolate/my
enemy/masquerade//I am a man/who bends until I'm
broken//suffocate my peace of mind/squeeze my soul until I'm
choking//you fire away/devastate/my enemy/a cold charade//
verse 2: only one I know so well/could decieve me so
completely//I turn around too late/it seems the knife is already
on its way//split the heart/through the spine/tossed aside/by a
dear friend of mine//
Bridge: This is mutiny/I've been betrayed/someday/I'll make you
pay//
Title:Apart From This World
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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CHORUS: I will not be a part of your world/I don't want the
bloodstains on my hands/I will not take part in your wars/I do
not share in your hate/
VERSE 1: Will you make a contribution to peace/or will you be a
pawn in the devil's game/I see the world that is now/and I can
see the hypocracy//Retaliate/avenge lives lost/Initiate the
wheels of blood lust/but do you feel better killing your
brother/we are all slowly dying//
VERSE 2:You want more but cannot be satisfied/you try so hard but
never wonder why/could it be your logic is impaired/things can be
so much better here//You speak of justice/you know not what it
means/you see no way out/hopeless is what it seems//So take up
arms/and feel the power/the day of judgement/has struck the hour/
Bridge: Bloodstains on your hands//Feed the hate machine//When
this world ends//is when we'll have some peace//
Title:Lives Lost
Artist:Micah Devereaux
Album:Death Penalty
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Verse 1: Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock/we're running out of time/The sands
of time washed away by the tide//Tick-Tock, Tick-Tock/What if it
ends today/How will they remember me//
Verse 2: A good samaritan gets stabbed helping someone/While
pedestrians pass him by/No one helps him, indifference/Who
remembered him after he died//
Chorus: I hear the tormented screaming/Of hollow souls in the
ground/If they had a second chance/They'd do things differently
next time around/
Verse 3: Two best friends are now enemies/A metaphoric
murder-suicide/a greedy man steps in front of a speeding train/30
pieces of silver couldn't cover his shame// |
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:35 pm Post subject: |
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There will be a slight delay before it is posted all over the internet so until then I have been trying to perfect my tone and audio quality so if you guys could give this a listen and let me know what you think that would be helpful, thanks and enjoy: http://www.mediafire.com/?nneth3gqmmn
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:27 am Post subject: |
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Everything is ready to go, its the weekend though so I'm not sure exactly when to expect it to be up, but everything is done so all thats left is to wait...
Also I've been obsessively trying to improve my audio and tonal quality and would like constructive feedback so here is a demo to listen to and critique, thanks and enjoy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eIZv9nb1QWI
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GregoryZero 
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 7:35 am Post subject: |
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Well, holy shit. Death Penalty sounds amazing.
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RushJunkie3
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 5:30 pm Post subject: |
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While I am not a big fan of this type of music, I enjoy it. Aside from the vocals (that's what I don't like about this genre). The parts where you are singing is fantastic. The instrumentation is amazing as well. I like it. Keep it up.
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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| GregoryZero wrote: | | Well, holy shit. Death Penalty sounds amazing. |
Thanks, I really appreciate it. Can't wait to share more music with you guys...
@Rushjunkie3: Glad to hear it, although the concept for this album is mostly metal I try to blend other elements into it as well so that there is something that everyone can enjoy. Keep rockin' guys... \m/
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Yewb 
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:19 pm Post subject: |
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Absolutely phenomenal. I love hearing real talent, and you've clearly spent a lot of time, effort, energy and money perfecting this. This isn't even a genre of music I particularly enjoy, but I genuinely loved it. Well done, good sir. I look forward to purchasing your album.
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| expertwin wrote: | | ShadoWolf wrote: | | expertwin wrote: | | I just want to, you know, get my name out there. BTW, it updates every Thursday, Friday, and Saturday. Was just the first two, decided to do Saturdays as well. |
Serious advice now: No-one likes indecision in their work, so find what you like that you're even remotely good at, and stick with it. Don't flit from one thing to another, because that just smacks of a large lack of determination and drive. And people don't like you for that, and won't remember you for it. I mean, I get that you have a plucky spirit and a willingness to try new things, but there's a limit, man. |
I might knock it down to just Thursday and Friday. |
| JOE2210 wrote: | | Leave me alone, I have been drinking and your made up words mean nothing to me. |
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toymachine 
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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Rock Band Network plz
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Boomsars
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:49 pm Post subject: |
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Not a fan of most of the vocals but that comes with the genre. That said, I could understand the vocals while they still held that harshness which is a big problem for a lot of metal vox. Instrumentation was good, really enjoyed it. Would listen again.
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solrac7623
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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I'm usually skeptical when someone shows their band on a forum, but I must say I'm very impressed. This is some pretty great stuff. I'll be looking forward to the album  |
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:44 am Post subject: |
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| Yewb wrote: | | Absolutely phenomenal. I love hearing real talent, and you've clearly spent a lot of time, effort, energy and money perfecting this. This isn't even a genre of music I particularly enjoy, but I genuinely loved it. Well done, good sir. I look forward to purchasing your album. |
Thanks very much Yewb, I know you are a talented lyricist and praise coming from you I consider very valuable...
@Toymachine: I really don't know much about RBN, I assume it has something to do with RB customs though. I would be very happy to chart (or have someone better at charting than me), but I am no good at charting drums so if anybody's up for it that would make my day!
@Boomsars: I totally get where your coming from and is a real issue with me as well as far as enunciating your lyrics. Its not easy, but it is possible...
@solrac7623: Cool, hopefully It'll get put up soon, shouldn't be long now..;)
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POKE-JJ
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| Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:55 am Post subject: |
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Wow, if you played all instruments, I am in awe!
I really liked your stuff. Reminds me a LOT of Lamb of God, in a good way.
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mdizzy
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| Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:18 am Post subject: |
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Yes, I did everything, even the cover art and the production. It seems like its the only way to get things done is to do it yourself lol, but thanks man. Lamb of God eh...cool I take that as a compliment, must be the vocals...>_>
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